✍️Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing
Stop writing 'she was sad' and start writing the tissue balled in her fist. Fourteen days of before/after rewrites and spot-the-tell drills that end with a 500-word scene conveying one emotion without ever naming it.
Phase 1Hearing the Difference
Hear the difference between telling and showing in real prose.
Telling names the feeling. Showing stages the evidence.
7 minTelling names the feeling. Showing stages the evidence.
The five senses do the work an adjective can't
7 minThe five senses do the work an adjective can't
Body language outranks dialogue tags
7 minBody language outranks dialogue tags
What the character doesn't say is the scene
8 minWhat the character doesn't say is the scene
Phase 2Rewriting and Spotting Tells
Rewrite telling sentences and spot tells in your own drafts.
The rewrite is where the craft lives
7 minThe rewrite is where the craft lives
The telling words you keep using without noticing
7 minThe telling words you keep using without noticing
Thought on the page is still showing, done right
8 minThought on the page is still showing, done right
'Said' is invisible. Every other tag is a speed bump.
6 min'Said' is invisible. Every other tag is a speed bump.
Rebuild one paragraph of yours from the ground up
8 minRebuild one paragraph of yours from the ground up
Phase 3When Showing Wins (and When Telling Does)
Connect showing to POV, pacing, and when telling wins.
The POV character decides what you're allowed to show
8 minThe POV character decides what you're allowed to show
Showing slows time. Telling moves it forward.
8 minShowing slows time. Telling moves it forward.
Trust the reader or lose them
7 minTrust the reader or lose them
Some beats are meant to be told
8 minSome beats are meant to be told
Phase 4The Capstone Scene
Draft a 500-word scene that names no emotion.
Draft a 500-word scene that never names the emotion
20 minDraft a 500-word scene that never names the emotion
Frequently asked questions
- What does 'show don't tell' actually mean in writing?
- This is covered in the “Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing” learning path. Start with daily 5-minute micro-lessons that build from fundamentals to hands-on application.
- When is it okay to tell instead of show?
- This is covered in the “Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing” learning path. Start with daily 5-minute micro-lessons that build from fundamentals to hands-on application.
- How do I know if I'm telling in my own prose?
- This is covered in the “Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing” learning path. Start with daily 5-minute micro-lessons that build from fundamentals to hands-on application.
- How does showing relate to point of view?
- This is covered in the “Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing” learning path. Start with daily 5-minute micro-lessons that build from fundamentals to hands-on application.
- Can you show an emotion without naming it?
- This is covered in the “Learn Show Don't Tell in Creative Writing” learning path. Start with daily 5-minute micro-lessons that build from fundamentals to hands-on application.
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